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Furry Wallpapers Anonymous 08/22/2019 (Thu) 22:54:49 No. 1557 [Reply]
A place to share furry wallpapers/backgrounds
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/hmofa/ - Human Males On Female Anthros General #870 Anonymous 12/27/2019 (Fri) 01:38:34 No. 1048 [Reply]
>"Post-Christmas Stupor" Edition

--Pastebin stories--

By Aimbot.exe
>Raine's Lingerie Incident - Part 2
https://pastebin.com/CTSpWcRP
>Raine's Lingerie Incident - Part 1
https://pastebin.com/ip253YkY

By Kaktus-nsfw
>Amorous Argentine
https://pastebin.com/gQD0HKTn

By Oliver_Hart
>A Red Winter
https://oliver-hart.itch.io/a-red-winter

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>>1682
I have a hunch that once a really big piece of content is put out the shitposting will stop...temporarily. I remember when Oliver was doing his weekly 'Leaves of Fall' updates and Burzum pretty much stopped entirely. I think this time it'll be Roo'd awakening that puts things back on track (no pressure).

But this does actually go back to a question I've been wondering about when I said I was thinking about VN stuff: Is this general/community/whatever worth that amount of effort? On the surface, I'd say no. But I'd still like to pursue it anyway because autism. Other writers should probably be asking themselves that question too.

Since I put down where people can contact me I've gotten in touch with a few people already, so feel free for more to reach out. Really what I think furchan should be is a more insulated general for people to bounce ideas off of and maybe even collab. This board also has moderation so if shitposting happens again appropriate steps can be taken.
This can also be an opportunity for other writers/artists to directly connect to one another. Who knows if I'll ever actually make serious steps towards a VN. But if someone is reading this or the above post I made and is inspired to try a similar concept, go right ahead. I feel we're on the precipice of creating something truly lasting, I can only guess at what that may be though.
>>1686
Lurker here to let you know you are inspiring/encouraging me, not to make a VN, but something just as "grand in scale". Thank you for going "crazy".
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>>1680
Welp, I probably could've held off on posting the first time, since I've gotten the next update out a lot sooner than usual. This update starts on line 1798.
>https://pastebin.com/hmcd2eMu
>>1678
check your paste when you get a chance

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Fuzzy Drawthread! Anonymous 09/19/2019 (Thu) 06:28:06 No. 453 [Reply]
Post and discuss your fuzzy art you've made!
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>>1681
Here's my sad attempt. Ill practice more.
>>1684
CUTE!
>>1685
Thanks anon! Maybe I'll post more in the future.
>>1688
You should! I have no artistic ability what so ever and its one of the few things I get jealous about. If you have some natural ability: I.E. if you just have the inclination to draw, do it. If you doodle everyday you'll get better and better. Then at some point you'll 'evolve' in a sense. Not because you think "I'm getting better, so now I must upgrade" like you're in an RPG. But because you're bored and want to do something different, like use colored gel pens or even those watercolor pens.

Just draw something, every day.
>>1689
Thanks that's honestly one of nicest things a stranger has ever told me. Ill keep up with doodling but I need to invest in some lessons and proper drawing tutorials. And of course tons of practice. Maybe I'll even post more of my doodles here... At least the presentable ones anyway...

Anonymous 10/21/2019 (Mon) 14:08:28 No. 693 [Reply]
/hmofa/ Writing Feedback Thread

Post your greens/pastes, request critiques, and provide feedback for others.

>>New to writing, or critiquing? Consult the Writing tips and Guides pastes!<<
https://pastebin.com/wpdsc7nC

>>Looking for feedback on your story?<<
-Try to clearly state what it is you want input on.
-Have patience! Good critique takes time to articulate!

>>Want to provide feedback?<<
-Try to address as many of the concerns the author mentions in their post.
-Avoid saying that you simply liked or disliked something! Provide reasoning for your critiques.
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>>1666
>>1668

Okay this is taking way longer than I thought. And I currently am trying to find everyday to do it. It my take me a couple more days for I want get it write:
>wording / spelling / grammatical mistakes
>thoughts on story and where to go and what not

I am putting it all in this paste bin and will update in periodically. I will get it done within the week

https://pastebin.com/irh01ny2
>>1670
(Part 1)

Finished with the whole review thing: https://pastebin.com/irh01ny2. Try not to see my "redlining" as corrections, though some of them are such as changing "the the" to "the", rather as suggestions/examples on how to look at your writing differently. My suggestions for additions/deletions/substitutions are not things that NEED to be there but could be there. Some of them may be matter of my opinion and my opinion can often be wrong so just do you. Be warned I am only a reader and not a seasoned writer of this /hmofa/. Without any further delay, here is my review:

CONS:

1) Biggest problem I saw was you trying to be to explain every single detail/motive of Ryan down to the exact angle he turned his palms. It is very hard to understand what you are trying to say sometimes. For Example:

"The Defender crawled through the heavy snow falling in thick tangles despite the icy temperatures. There was just so much of it that there wasn't enough room for the snow to fall in single flakes"

That is a lot of words to essentially convey "The car went through heavy snow". Such detail would make sense if it helped set up a following sentence, but it really doesn't in the context of this story.

2) If this is supposed to be a love/romance kind of fic, then I believe it could use more scenes that establish a relationship/connections b/w the two, perhaps a time skip of a week or 2, where they came up with there own set of signals or something to understand each other.

3) The anthros height was barely referred/described/utilized throughout the story after the car ride: how was he able to scrub the body without a step stool? Wouldn't she be intimidating and wouldn't she be aware of that?

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>>1671
(Part 2)

Pros
1) The sex scene and the bathing scene leading up to it has adequate flow and detail relative to other stories I read: the positioning of the hands of both partners was never confusing and the reaction to stimuli was not awkward and tacked on.

2) The level of detail and focus on the anthro and how ryan had to move her around was quite extensive and really help to sell the reader of the anthro. I find that writers of /hmofa/ tend to not put into as much detail about the anthro indirectly and directly through the protag (if it's the human) five senses. Writing about an anthro is not like writing about a human where readers have a good fundamental idea of all the different shapes of humans and how their bodies interact with others and the environment. Are dictionary is built around the human anatomy and physiology, thus, incorporating anthros in a story involves one to go beyond what they who normally do for humans. Here are some examples of what you did that was above and beyond:

> the "clipclop" of her hooves in the house
> Ryan having to keep her head out of the water b/c her long snout would be submerged if her head was down.
> her enormous diet
> her size was explained well
> her head swinging around when she was unconscious as Ryan drag her was actually a hazard b/c her long snout would turn into a club every time her head would move

3) Details about the cooling system, the car, etc. They convey world building and keep the story feeling alive.
>>1672
(Part 3)
Regarding on where to take the story next:
If anything I think you should flesh out their relationship and establish some sort of communication b/w them. After that what I said earlier: >>1664 >>1665 still stands.

Summary:
Overall I bit more off than I could chew when reviewing this story, and what started as a simple feedback routine, turned into a whole redlining thing. I initially set a timer, b/c I wanted to wait for someone more qualified to look at it. I didn't cover everything, and I didn't address all the "areas of concerned" in my redlining". The least you can take from this is that you are at the point as a writer that you can make compelling/interesting stories, though you have problems conveying in a way that readers can understand. I say this b/c I spent most of my free time for a whole week "redlining" this story, and I wouldn't have done that if I didn't see any use in giving you feedback in hopes that you would improve. To be honest too, another reason I was spending so much time on this story is b/c I have a great affinity for communication semantics, storage, and organization and ,thus, I enjoyed reading about your descriptions of the auto cooling system and Ryan's logical step process of trying to revive someone from potential hypothermia. Anyway, I hope this feedback helped and I look forward to the next chapters of "Cold & Native"
>>1671
I posted the wrong link. Here is the right one:
https://pastebin.com/irh01ny2

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Anonymous 08/30/2019 (Fri) 08:16:47 No. 27 [Reply]
/hmofa/ - Human Males On Female Anthros General #759

>"Fluffy Foxxo" Edition

--Pastebin stories--

By SUB_ANON
>Decennial
https://pastebin.com/rPgQkvw5

By Idontwantthis
>Altruistic Intent (Line 422)
https://pastebin.com/9DB0eB6p

By Anon_The_Shitposter
>Vanguard Anon and Padmayan Adventures
https://pastebin.com/Sw4N3YNQ

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>>1042
The quiet was nice while it lasted.

And this is unrelated, but can we make a new thread here already? This has become a pain in the ass to check on mobile.
>>1042
The dedication of the shitposter ultimately is the worst for himself. Imagine spending so much time on something you hate. And then not even something you can share, which is impressive in its own way. If you're a black supremacist who also thinks Jews were originally black, there's a club for you. You can have homeboys to shout racially charged shit at people with.
>>1044
I'll go make a new one.

>>1045
He probably sees it as a personal accomplishment that he was able to drive away people from the main general by the powers of nihilism and shit.
>>1046
hah, I was just in the process of doing the same. my template so far:

/hmofa/ - Human Males On Female Anthros General #870, FurChan Version

>"Tis the Season" Edition

--Pastebin stories--

By Aimbot.exe
>Raine's Lingerie Incident - Part 2
https://pastebin.com/CTSpWcRP
>Raine's Lingerie Incident - Part 1
https://pastebin.com/ip253YkY

By Kaktus-nsfw
>Amorous Argentine

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>>1047
I ended up making it before seeing your post. >>1048

Just post whatever is missing below it in the thread.

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r00t Board owner 08/22/2019 (Thu) 21:58:46 No. 1 [Reply]
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